Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Activity #4 Principles of Design

This essay will be discussing the principles of design between both paintings. In the painting Banks of the Seine, Vétheuil painted by Claude Monet has alot of unity throughout the painting. You can see the unity in the painting as a whole. Everything goes together theres nothing there making you wonder why is it in the painting. There isn't any variety in the painting to really make it interesting to really make it pop. You can say that there is some subordination in the painting. To me you can see all the green and yellows really bring the painting togeher. This painting would be considered asymmetrical there are things that make the painting seem like its in a awkward state. There is definitely emphasis in this painting. When you look at the painting you see the bush at first glance and the rest of the painting follows right after the bushes. Proportion is really represented in the painting; when you look at the painting the bushes are the size they would be if you were there looking at this beautiful scenery. The trees look as if their smaller than they should actually be, but if you were there thats size the trees would actually look. The painting has alot of rhythm when you look at the trees there is a repeated shape that also goes for the bushes and lake. In painting Midsummer Twilight painted by Willard Leroy Metcalf has about the same principles throughout the painting as the done by Claude Monet. There is unity in the painting represented by houses, trees and farm everything goes together nothing sets it apart. It has some variet in the painting. If someone likes farm life and quietnesss this painting be an interest to them. The subordination in this painting would be represented in the houses with the orande roof tops, yellows and greens in the trees and the land of the painting. This would be considered a asymmetrical painting the houses, trees and land are all different in the size category. The emphasis in the paintingis the houses and trees they are the first things you can see when look at the painting. Everything is proportioned right if you where there on the land thats exactly how everything would look. There is alot of rhythm in the painting with the houses, land and trees. They are repeating eith the shapes and sizes. Both paintings in conlusion have alot of similarities. The only thing thats really different between the two would be the variety. One of the paintings looks more interesting the the othe does. Midsummer Twilight looks very calming, quiet and peaceful whereas Banks of the Seine, Vétheuil just looks a little boring then the other painting.

1 comment:

Anne Brew said...

Dear Krystal,

It is refreshing to read a writing done by a student is plain everyday talk. This essay tries hard to name the design pricniples and define them and then support the statement with something from each artwork.

Comments:

1. the essay has the flow of a grocery list Try to make one sentece flow from one to the next by linking words. For example:

the essay says:

"To me you can see all the green and yellows really bring the painting togeher. This painting would be considered asymmetrical there are things that make the painting seem like its in a awkward state."

Perhaps it could read as:

To me you can see all the green and yellows really bring the painting togeher. Another principle that brings this painting together is balance. Monet uses asymmetry. Asymmetry is when there is more visual weight on one side of the work than on the other.

( there are things that make the painting seem like its in a awkward state.) leave this out if you are not going to explain it.

2. consider employing a more developed paragraph style. Have a clear thesis sentence, a supporting body and a conclusion.

3. A painting cannot have unity without variety. It is the variety that make us see the unity.

4. Where is the unity in this work? look at the horizontal bands of sky, horizon, water, and heather and the color

5. Where is the variety? Look at the visual texture, in the sky, the water and the heather.Look at the contrast in the colors

6. there is a major different in Metcalf and Monet.

Monet uses soothing horizontal lines and Metcalf employs strong diagonals.

What temperature of colors is Monet using compared to the temperature of color that Metcalf depicts?

What about color harmony?

Monet uses analogous whereas Metcalf uses...?